Poetry

Soft Winds

Nature speaks without a tongue,
and sings with her every motion.
She moves with elegance unfelt,
save for the soft winds, to whose
song the tall trees dance.

 

57 thoughts on “Soft Winds”

  1. rainefairy says:

    Wow! This hits me right and good. Love it!

  2. andysmerdon says:

    Sweet… succinct and true. Very nicely written. Thanks for sharing.

    1. John Foster says:

      Thank you very much for your comment!

  3. Wordifull Melanie says:

    …and what a song she sings. Beauty for those who will but listen.

    1. John Foster says:

      Yes, absolutely. Thanks for your comment.

  4. Saint In Training says:

    Simply beautiful! This poem is brief but it leaves a lasting impression. I’m more than certain that I will remember it for some time to come. You are truly gifted and I pray God blesses you to produce more beauty – the world needs it, thus it needs you.

    Thanks John for following us (Mom and I) and thank you so much for this piece. I don’t follow often because time doesn’t permit me to read as much as I’d like BUT I’m making an exception here.

    Praying for your continued growth and blessings,
    Rebecca

    1. John Foster says:

      Wow, thank you for such an encouraging and uplifting comment. I’m truly humbled and grateful for your feedback and prayers. It is a wonderful opportunity to connect with you and I wish you all the best.

  5. Silent~Dugood says:

    Electric, elegant and full of passion

    1. John Foster says:

      Thank you! What a great compliment.

    1. John Foster says:

      Thanks for reading and for the reference!

  6. OldenGray says:

    A short work of art with a tall story. Very nice.

    1. John Foster says:

      Thank you very much for sharing.

  7. resoplayer says:

    As heartfelt a description as I have seen written. If only more could hear her song.

    1. John Foster says:

      That is very kind of you; thank you for your comment.

  8. Lola Elvy says:

    I like the brevity of this one; it leaves the effect short and powerful, memorable without overstating it, which can hard to accomplish with poetry. Nice piece.

    —Lola Elvy

    1. John Foster says:

      Thank you for your excellent feedback! Great to hear from you.

  9. Elle says:

    an elegant piece of poetry!

  10. kj ❤ says:

    Beautiful piece <3

    1. John Foster says:

      Thank you for reading and for your comment!

  11. Geo Sans says:

    opening
    ~
    sensations

  12. Vashti Quiroz-Vega says:

    Hello John! Wow! You moved me with so few words. That’s talent! :D

    1. John Foster says:

      Thank you so much for reading. I’m glad the words had an impact. I appreciate your comment!

  13. moylomenterprises says:

    This piece makes me want to relax in a hammock under a big tree and be lulled to sleep by the ‘soft winds’ of which you wrote. Very relaxing imagery. Kudos!

    1. John Foster says:

      Thank you for your lovely comment. I’m glad it brought you some tranquility.

  14. Bryan Ens says:

    beautiful…such a seemingly quiet piece, and yet so full of joy and motion

    1. John Foster says:

      Thanks so much for you comment, I truly appreciate it!

  15. cote8050 says:

    very well done, lovely choice of words, I can see the trees move, more importantly, I can feel your words, I look forward to reading more of your blog. Thank you for liking my poem, “A Perfect Fit”

    1. John Foster says:

      My pleasure. Thank you for your comment!

    2. K.R.Buchanan says:

      I agree love how descriptive it’s is !!

      1. John Foster says:

        Thanks for stopping by to read and comment!

    1. kukupassion says:

      this is beautiful, real beautiful

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